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Monday, January 14, 2013

★Essay About The Video TED★

I saw a video about on girl, who presentation about adult should learn from children.Her name is Adora Svitak. She insist about adult shoould learn from children.The reason of this opinion is like this. Children is creative.Childrenis future of us.The goal of raise children is not for make same as yours, its for make more strong and better adults.Age is not important. Children is already learn a lot of things from adults. Teacher should not order to students to do something...etc...She is really good at explaining her and children's mind. But there has some wrong things. Maybe it is just a difference of thought. But I want to tell you about it. If you saw a video of her speech, you know that what she said. I agree most of her opinion, but also there are some opinion what I disagree about it. First she said children are already learned from adults. But we are studing in the school(or house)to learn more. Children, even high school students don't know about lots of subject and social more than adults. Its real. Adults want to make them realize the world and hope them to live happily, so they teach them. And children don't know about all of the symbol marks, and they can't live happily without many symbols. They have to learn about it. Especially kindergarten to elementary school students. They are not already learn all of the world. And second, she said teacher should not order to students to do this or this... But teachers had claim to say it. And teacher should say that to teach them. If teacher don't say like this, student can't learn or study.This is my opinion of her speech. I think she is good at saying her opinion, but she have to understand adult's position too. She have to consider lots of situations, and think about it before her speech. Thank you for reading my essay. Bye~ 

1 comment:

  1. You need to check more carefully to fix small mistakes (there are many in your essay).

    I agree that teachers still should teach children, but I don't think Miss Svitak was saying that this shouldn't happen anymore. "Reciprocal" is the word she used. This means children learn from adults, and adults learn from children.

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